Animatic Storyboard

This is my animatic for my film. I can tell that my shots will fit the amount of time allowed but I may need more shots to be able to edit them in time with the music. However my animatic is like a draft for my film; from doing this I can tell what else I need when I do the final shooting which is helpful to me.
From re-watching this, it feels very boring. Therefore, from using inspiration from 127 Hours, I will use more, interesting split screen throughout the film other than random moments.
I may change the music also. I am going to add a lot more split screen in more interesting ways and other locations. When making the animatic I didn't include intertitles but my intertitles shall include my chosen font and will move across the screen.
I may change the costume as it seem to be quite gothic and doesn't relate to young adults or teenagers as well as not showing the identity of my character.